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So this is pure, unmitigated smut. But it's the first thing I've been able to finish in something like two or three weeks, so I don't care!

Written as a very belated ficlet-request response for [livejournal.com profile] sateenmusta, who wanted Brendon/Ryan rimming. Hope this serves. Um, NC-17, obviously.


If he's perfectly honest, Brendon knows he doesn't do this because he's all that into the act itself. He does it because Ryan is.

He does it because it makes Ryan shiver and push back into it and make these sweet, needy noises, and there's nothing about that that Brendon doesn't love.

Brendon presses Ryan against the wall with both hands on Ryan's hips, then sinks to his knees. Ryan's trying to see him, neck craned so he can look back over his shoulder. He won't be able to see, but Brendon appreciates the effort, so he rewards Ryan by biting at the curve of his ass, sinking his teeth into the rough denim and licking across the material.

Ryan makes a small, throaty sound but doesn't move, so Brendon drops his hands from Ryan's hips to his ass, fitting him palms over the back pockets and squeezing. His thumbs creep in toward the back seam and rub up and down, enough pressure that Ryan should be able to feel it through the denim. Brendon presses his thumbs into the give of flesh, then presses them outward, licking between them.

The nap of the denim drags across his tongue, but he presses hard and licks again and again, until his chin is wet and Ryan's jeans grow dark in that one vertical line, saliva soaking into the material. Brendon licks until Ryan's pushing back into Brendon's mouth and forward into the wall. His hands are still pressed palm-down to the plaster. So is his forehead.

Brendon likes it, how Ryan seems to have given himself over to this, but he knows it can get better, so he stills Ryan's hips with a hand in the small of his back.

"Come on," he says. "Bed."

Ryan sucks in a shuddering breath and turns from the wall, but he doesn't go straight for the bed. Instead, he pulls Brendon toward him with one hand on the back of his neck and licks into Brendon's mouth. It's not a long kiss, or a deep one, because Ryan's smiling against Brendon's mouth, which has Brendon smiling, too.

When Ryan finally pulls back, placing a final, chaste kiss on Brendon's mouth, he turns to the bed, stripping along the way. And that's what Brendon always calls it in his head: stripping. Because it never makes a difference how matter-of-factly Ryan takes his clothes off. The fact remains that he's taking his clothes off and Brendon has never been able to think of that, to see that, without thinking of sex. Even when Ryan changes after a show, the reveal of the long, sharp lines of his body and the pale stretches of skin is inherently sensual.

Brendon pulls of his own clothes, dropping them haphazardly to the ground and watching the muscles of Ryan's back moving smoothly when Ryan settles onto the bed. He lies on his stomach, propping himself on his elbows with one leg bent at the knee and pushed out to the side, shaping his spine into a concave curve and pushing his ass up.

Like Brendon thought, this is even better than seeing Ryan pushed against the wall.

Brendon doesn't even realize he's just standing there, watching, until Ryan looks back over his shoulder again, only this time with more impatience.

"Taking your time?" Ryan asks.

Brendon sticks out his tongue but climbs onto the bed, settling between Ryan's legs, and the corners of Ryan's mouth turn up.

"That's more like it," Ryan says, and Brendon snorts a little, because he swears Ryan hasn't always been this light-hearted in bed, and Brendon likes to think it's his good influence.

It doesn't take a lot to get Ryan worked up for this. When Ryan was undressing, Brendon got a good look at how hard his cock was already, so Brendon wastes no time. He palms Ryan's ass and holds him open, leaning in to lick a quick stripe from behind Ryan's balls all the way up the cleft of his ass.

He knows the fleeting touch isn't as concentrated as Ryan wants it, but Brendon wants Ryan to have to work for it a little, to let go and show how much he wants it. So Brendon repeats the action once, then again, pointing his tongue more so it dips, prodding more heavily against Ryan's asshole on the next pass.

Ryan shudders, but stays quiet. Not good enough.

Brendon digs his thumbs into Ryan's ass, spreading his cheeks wider and backing away to admire. He blows softly on the wet skin, and yes that's it. Ryan moans, and Brendon can see his hole clenching. He leans back down and laps at it so he can feel the muscles working under his tongue.

This is his favorite part, just settling in and licking away, slow and lingering, then in fast, sharp flicks. He varies the pace until Ryan's shaking and panting and saying, "Brendon, Brendon, please."

Ryan is never sweeter than when he wants Brendon's tongue pushing into his ass.

"Okay, okay," Brendon says soothingly. He drags the flat of his tongue over Ryan's hole one more time, then presses a close-mouthed kiss to it. Ryan's entire body shudders then, and Brendon finally pushes past the ring of muscle and inside Ryan's body.

Brendon can't say he really likes the earthy taste, but Ryan's needy cries make Brendon's dick jerk. He rides out the slow writhe of Ryan's hips when Brendon starts tongue-fucking him slow and steady. He lets Ryan push back into it, then shove forward, rubbing his cock against the bed. Brendon keeps going, pushing his tongue as deep as he can, working Ryan slick and open.

Brendon digs his fingers deeper into the flesh of Ryan's ass and holds him still then. Ryan whimpers a bit but complies, giving one last slow rub of his stiff cock against the mattress.

Brendon withdraws his tongue from Ryan's ass with a lewd, wet sound, but he's not trying to be cruel, so he's quick to replace his tongue with his thumb, rubbing it across Ryan's asshole once to make sure he knows what's coming. It sinks in smoothly, and it's a little awkward at first, using his thumb on Ryan and trying to crook it right to find the spot. When he gets it right, though, Ryan grunts, so Brendon does it again, then again, and Ryan's already crying out when Brendon's other thumb nudges him further open and slides in.

It makes it so easy for Brendon to stretch Ryan open so he can lick between his thumbs and then slip his tongue back into Ryan.

Ryan's voice cracks when he cries, "Brendon!"

The want in his voice makes Brendon shudder, because God, nothing gets Ryan like this. It would be so easy to fuck him now that he's open and desperate, but this is what Ryan wants -- wants it enough to beg for it -- and Brendon's going to give it to him.

So Brendon keeps Ryan open and keeps his tongue moving, pressing in deep and wet. He rubs over Ryan's prostate over and over until Ryan's hips start working against the mattress, rubbing frantically. Brendon keeps working him until Ryan's asshole spasms and clenches tight, and Ryan comes all over the bedding. Brendon tongue-fucks him through it until Ryan goes limp under him and moans into the sheets.

Brendon finally pulls back then. He rises onto his knees, breathing hard and wiping the back of his hand across his mouth and chin.

It might not be Brendon's kink, but Ryan is Brendon's kink -- when Ryan's turned on, so is Brendon, and God he wants to get off now.

Ryan is heavy and boneless, but he turns easily when Brendon's hands urge him to roll over. The sheets are a mess. Ryan's cock and belly are sticky with come, his eyes are heavy-lidded and satisfied, and his lower lip is red and plump from where he was probably biting it. He looks thoroughly debauched.

Ryan's gaze flickers down to Brendon's cock, and he licks his lips, says, "Touch yourself."

Brendon moves to straddle Ryan's hips, pushing his own hips forward and putting himself on easy display. Then he obeys.
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Date: 2007-11-08 10:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saturnalia.livejournal.com
ASkl;jfsadsf. Man, I'd been having a really boring morning, practically fell asleep in my first seminar- I think this was exactly what I needed to wake me up again. Fabulous. :D

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Date: 2007-11-09 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad it was of some help in a boring morning. :)

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Date: 2007-11-08 11:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sateenmusta.livejournal.com
o_o

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Wow. Is it just me or did the temperature just rise for about 20 degrees?? o_O

Thank-you thank-you thank-you for this. <33333
-fans self-
just.... wow. <3

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Date: 2007-11-09 08:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! I wasn't sure which one of them you wanted to be the one getting rimmed, so I'm happy to know this worked. And I'm grateful for your prompt since it somehow let me finally write something. So thank you.

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Date: 2007-11-08 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] notsolaconic.livejournal.com
Jesus, that was good.

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Date: 2007-11-09 08:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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Date: 2007-11-08 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sockich.livejournal.com
...I'm pretty sure my brain just melted. Hot damn, woman.

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Date: 2007-11-09 08:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Mission accomplished! I mean, ooops? Glad you liked it, sweetie. :D

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Date: 2007-11-09 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-emptyroom.livejournal.com
Holy hell, I think that may have melted my screen it was so hot. (Or, y'know, melted my brain.)

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Date: 2007-11-09 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Hee! I really appreciate your letting me know you enjoyed. Thanks!

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Date: 2007-11-10 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slowlikewine.livejournal.com
Good lord. That was filthy dirty and I fucking LOVED it.

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Date: 2007-11-11 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
\o/ Yay, thanks! I don't know what my deal is with this fandom and porn; I've never written so much dirty stuff before!

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Date: 2007-11-10 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darksylvia.livejournal.com
OMG, YES. RYAN IS BRENDON'S KINK. TRUTH.

Ryan is never sweeter than when he wants Brendon's tongue pushing into his ass.

That line just killed me a little, in the best possible way.

HOT.

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Date: 2007-11-11 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
I TOTALLY THINK IT IS THE TRUTH!

And no lie, that was my favorite line in the whole thing, so I think you have terrific taste. :P

Thank you, my dear!

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Date: 2007-11-11 08:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luciamad.livejournal.com
That was ridiculously hot. I am trying to think of ways to convey the depth of the hotness, but I keep coming up short. There are not enough explicit rimming fics in the world, and there should be. Watching Ryan come apart is a thing of beauty, but still maintaining that dry thing he has, all monosyllabic and wry.

I love how enthralled Brendon is with Ryan. That he comes apart watching Ryan as much as Ryan does. That thread of the things Brendon will do because Ryan likes them, the lengths he'd go to see him get to that place, that's an interesting thing to think about.

Ryan's gaze flickers down to Brendon's cock, and he licks his lips, says, "Touch yourself."

Brendon moves to straddle Ryan's hips, pushing his own hips forward and putting himself on easy display. Then he obeys.


Ok, I love how casually demanding Ryan can be in that state of thorough debauchery. And there's something about the words in that last line. The 'display' and 'obeys,' just how displayed that one line makes Brendon after all that displaying of Ryan Ross. But then all the previous display is through Brendon looking at Ryan, through him thinking in those terms so then when he turns those terms on himself at the end, I don't know, it's just interesting. The flip of it.

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Date: 2007-11-11 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
♥ ♥ ♥

Wow, thank you! Talk about making a girl's day! I wouldn't have expected such in-depth feedback over straight-up porn, but I'm thrilled that you liked it and that their characters came through so well in it.

Personally, Brendon in this ficlet is a good bit of how I could see him being in a relationship with Ryan -- he wants to please Ryan, he loves pleasing him and making him come apart, and he gets off on that. In the end, when the tables turn, it's mostly because I think Brendon likes showing Ryan how sexy he thinks Ryan is, how much Ryan turns him on. It's always for Ryan, and he would try anything Ryan wanted. God, I'm ridiculous, but I think it'd be really fucking sweet, no matter how filthy the sex was.

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Date: 2007-11-11 09:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] disarm-d.livejournal.com
Hot! HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT! And yet totally in character. Brendon being eager to please and Ryan knowing what he likes and asking for it, and oh my god, so fucking hot. You're amazing.

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Date: 2007-11-12 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
No lie, Laura, I think one of my kinks is people discovering their OWN kinks. It's super fucking hot to me. Ngh. Aaaanyway, thank you! You make me feel warm and fuzzy and special. *hugs*

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Date: 2007-11-11 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] itchyloon.livejournal.com
How have I not commented on this yet? I've probably read it at least 5 times since you posted it.

Seriously, just awesome. I can always appreciate awesome writing and filthy, filthy porn. <3

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Date: 2007-11-12 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Hee, thanks! I'm tickled to have written something you found worth reading more than once!

And yay, filthy porn forever and always!

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Date: 2007-11-11 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theaerosolkid.livejournal.com
Um, wow.

This was both obscenely hot and very well-characterized! Awesome :D

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Date: 2007-11-12 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Thank you! Obviously I have nothing against just porn, but I'm happy to hear that it came across as something more than just sex.

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Date: 2007-11-12 03:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] so-recockulous.livejournal.com
now see...
that is what im talking about!
haha, leave it to sateenmusta to pull it out of you, -winks-

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Date: 2007-11-12 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Yep, apparently if the prompt is porny enough, I'm on it! :D Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 2007-11-12 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] airgiodslv.livejournal.com
Oh wow. I can't remember offhand any other story that shows something that isn't a kink for someone but is still a turn-on because of their partner's reaction to it, and I love what you've done with this. It was hot and intelligent and really interesting to read, the whole way through, which porn usually isn't for me! Well done.

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Date: 2007-11-12 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
I totally love you for this comment, because I'm a huge fan of someone getting off on getting someone else off, and to know that it worked for you and that you liked that aspect is really happy-making. So thank you!

Also, on the subject of fic with someone going along with something that isn't a kink of theirs, I'm completely unhelpful finding you anything new because I always go back and read that Spencer/Brendon D/s comment fic of yours. I adore how Brendon is so willing to do what Spencer wants him to in that. Mmmm. It's just so easy to see Brendon as being willing to please in bed.

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Date: 2007-11-12 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyquil-love.livejournal.com
Oh Jesus! This was so hot.
Brendon licking Ryan through his jeans was amazing. And, Ryan coming on the sheets was equally amazing.
I love you for writing this.
I'm definitely adding this to my memories.
=)

p.s.
It would be so easy to fuck him now that he's open and desperate, but this is what Ryan wants
I think this was my favorite line because it really conveys how much desire Brendon has for him, very effectively. (I don't even have a dick, but I kind of wanted to fuck Ryan at this moment)
Sorry, I'm a perv.

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Date: 2007-11-12 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Thank you! I so glad to know you enjoyed it so much! (And you're TOTALLY not alone in being a perv. Who wouldn't want to fuck Ryan at a moment like that? Ngh.)

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Date: 2007-11-12 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arsenicjade.livejournal.com
Okay, see, this, this very thing is essentially what makes rimming so hot to me: the idea of someone doing it because their partner wants it. And wow, did you capture that.

It might not be Brendon's kink, but Ryan is Brendon's kink -- when Ryan's turned on, so is Brendon, and God he wants to get off now.

That might be the best line on their relationship I've ever read.

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Date: 2007-11-13 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
♥ Thank you, dear. I have to say, I love to think of Brendon being like this, so eager to please and so turned on by the results. Oh, Brendon.

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Date: 2007-11-13 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rock-my-town.livejournal.com
This was so hot and sexy and really beautiful the way that Brendon just loves to get Ryan off like that because that's what Ryan craves. And the word delicious keeps coming to my head.

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Date: 2007-11-13 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Guy Ripley would approve! :D

Seriously, though, thank you. I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: 2007-11-19 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adri-n.livejournal.com
"Ryan is never sweeter than when he wants Brendon's tongue pushing into his ass."

This bit may have killed me.

Plus, the idea that Brendon is doing it not because he likes it but because Ryan wants it so much is just amazingly tender and really,really hot.

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Date: 2007-11-19 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
That's my favorite part, too. :) And I love eager-to-please Brendon, so I'm glad he worked for you. Thank you so much for your kind words!

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Date: 2007-12-13 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callsigns.livejournal.com
Nrrrrrgghghghghghghghhhhggghghgahhhh. That was exactly what I needed to read this morning. Rimming is so hot when it gets everyone hot! Ryan is Brendon's kink, awww. Thank you for a fantastic read!

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Date: 2007-12-19 09:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
And thank you for your lovely feedback! I'm glad to know you enjoyed it! And, oh boy, I LOVE it when the person giving a blowjob or rimming their partner gets turned on from doing it. Everybody wins! And I'mma steal a line from Paris Hilton and say THAT'S HOT.

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Date: 2007-12-21 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liahs-n-fakes.livejournal.com
okay so you owe me a new brain, cuz mine kinda gooed out of my ear.
...
so hott.

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Date: 2008-02-05 08:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Eeeep! I'm doubly sorry! One, for melting your brain, and two, for falling down on the job and not saying thank you sooner! I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: 2008-02-21 09:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] disc0-dancer.livejournal.com
It might not be Brendon's kink, but Ryan is Brendon's kink

YES! YES!!! A thousand times YES!!!!

It's so perfect! That's seriously true love, no? I have no more words for this! My brain is mushified.

Also, licking through the jeans = hott.

I just barely caught wind of this story, so I'm apologizing for the random comment. ;)

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Date: 2008-03-02 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
And I'm apologizing for taking a good long time to thank you for your kind comment! I'm really happy to know that you enjoyed this! And ugh, licking through jeans is TOTALLY a bit of a kink for me, so I'm pleased you thought that part was hot. Thanks!

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Date: 2008-02-25 11:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadziadrgnrdr.livejournal.com
I love this for the kink but more so for how giving Brendon is as a lover and how he does this for Ryan because he knows he likes it. Awwww. Rim jobs are love.

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Date: 2008-03-02 10:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com
Hah! I love that "Rim jobs are love" is kind of the perfect summary for this. Thank you! And I'm really glad you enjoyed it and liked the way it played out.

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Date: 2008-08-08 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] disturbiaa-x.livejournal.com
"Ryan is never sweeter than when he wants Brendon's tongue pushing into his ass."

SDSDK?!

YES.

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Date: 2008-08-08 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] playful-lips.livejournal.com
jesus fucking christ.


fuck fuck fuck.
hot.

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Date: 2008-08-11 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isitstillme.livejournal.com
Ryan's gaze flickers down to Brendon's cock, and he licks his lips, says, "Touch yourself."

Brendon moves to straddle Ryan's hips, pushing his own hips forward and putting himself on easy display. Then he obeys.


Erm, phwoar. this is like my third time reading this and wow. still HOT.

Thankyou thankyou thankyou x!!!

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Date: 2008-09-18 04:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyasuriin.livejournal.com

PHWOAR! That was incredibly hot, just so you know *g*
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