omg, dude, this is FABULOUS. I have to say, the voices, the set up, the writing - everything about it is wonderful.
the way he talks and walks like he owns you and everyone and everything around him. The way he takes shit from his team more than he would from anybody else. The way Dom inspires loyalty in pretty much everyone, the way he looks unbreakable but has weaknesses. Like how he wants to trust Brian because maybe it's been a while since he's had anyone new, anyone who needed for him to open up and let them inside
That right there is DOM, in a nutshell. Perfect description of Dom, and the way Dom is with Brian.
Brian recognizes that look Vince shoots him, the angry helplessness of knowing you're right, but also knowing that there's no way to prove it
*Wonderful* description of that scene right there. In a way, sometimes, when I let myself, I feel BAD for Vince. It's like, he's the *only one* who sees this, and he's constantly trying to get others to see it too, but everyone is blinded by Brian in their own ways. Perfect writing.
And the the sex! The omg SO HOT sex! In an alley! slutty Brian! The talking in the car!
It's hard to swallow, to form words, so Brian nods instead. It's the complete lies that are always hardest to get out. "Thanks for trusting me," Brian says, and there's nothing but honesty in that.
God - the ending! This is just --
WONDERFUL fic. Totally. (Also, yay! I thought I was the only person to write F&F for that challenge so w00t! Go team us!)
Thanks so much for linking to this! I hope you write more!
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the way he talks and walks like he owns you and everyone and everything around him. The way he takes shit from his team more than he would from anybody else. The way Dom inspires loyalty in pretty much everyone, the way he looks unbreakable but has weaknesses. Like how he wants to trust Brian because maybe it's been a while since he's had anyone new, anyone who needed for him to open up and let them inside
That right there is DOM, in a nutshell. Perfect description of Dom, and the way Dom is with Brian.
Brian recognizes that look Vince shoots him, the angry helplessness of knowing you're right, but also knowing that there's no way to prove it
*Wonderful* description of that scene right there. In a way, sometimes, when I let myself, I feel BAD for Vince. It's like, he's the *only one* who sees this, and he's constantly trying to get others to see it too, but everyone is blinded by Brian in their own ways. Perfect writing.
And the the sex! The omg SO HOT sex! In an alley! slutty Brian! The talking in the car!
It's hard to swallow, to form words, so Brian nods instead. It's the complete lies that are always hardest to get out. "Thanks for trusting me," Brian says, and there's nothing but honesty in that.
God - the ending! This is just --
WONDERFUL fic. Totally. (Also, yay! I thought I was the only person to write F&F for that challenge so w00t! Go team us!)
Thanks so much for linking to this! I hope you write more!