Thanks! It's good to know that the tone of the fic worked well with that of the movie; it was originally supposed to be a lot lighter, but it kind of mutated.
I'm curious about Lompoc, too. Like how long he was in for and what kind of inmate he would have been. Did Mia and the crew come to visit, or was Dom the type who wanted them to stay away? Just...there are so many possibilities! Unfortunately, all I know about prison I learned from OZ, so my visions of prison are probably pretty laughable. *g*
your restraint at the end in not taking it any further just makes this work so well.
I'm actually kind of glad to hear that. I know another author probably could have gotten them off, but it wasn't working in my head, so I decided not to force it. It's reassuring that you think it worked as is. And thanks again for the feedback!
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Date: 2005-05-26 06:07 pm (UTC)I'm curious about Lompoc, too. Like how long he was in for and what kind of inmate he would have been. Did Mia and the crew come to visit, or was Dom the type who wanted them to stay away? Just...there are so many possibilities! Unfortunately, all I know about prison I learned from OZ, so my visions of prison are probably pretty laughable. *g*
your restraint at the end in not taking it any further just makes this work so well.
I'm actually kind of glad to hear that. I know another author probably could have gotten them off, but it wasn't working in my head, so I decided not to force it. It's reassuring that you think it worked as is. And thanks again for the feedback!