When I finished writing I was a little embarrassed by how chock-full of cliches this thing is, but in the end, fic cliches are cliches for a reason: because they work somehow and people like to see them! So I figured it was okay.

And I get what you mean about the sex. I wanted them to get some satisfaction, too! Time permitting, I'm seriously considering writing a followup. Thanks for your feedback!