Thank you! It's always good to hear that the things that work for you work for others. Because to me, the reason why Dom and Brian would be so hot together is because of that dynamic they already have. There's something about the way they interact that makes me believe that they would be like this together when they wouldn't be with anyone else. Like, Dom wouldn't be possessive with Letty; that's her gig. And with Mia, Brian would never be so open and willing and ready. And that's about the point where my brain turns to mush and coherent thought ceases. ;)
As for a sequel, I'm certainly going to try. My original bunny covered more ground, and I at least want to get written all that I'd envisioned. And I must say, I'm always thrilled to pieces when people say anything I wrote was hot because I tend to think my smut-writing skills are rather measly. So thanks again for your feedback!
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Date: 2005-05-26 06:20 pm (UTC)As for a sequel, I'm certainly going to try. My original bunny covered more ground, and I at least want to get written all that I'd envisioned. And I must say, I'm always thrilled to pieces when people say anything I wrote was hot because I tend to think my smut-writing skills are rather measly. So thanks again for your feedback!