CARDBOARD IS UNACCEPTABLE

I found your story to be very erotic. You're a very descriptive writer-it's easy to visualize the characters movements/actions. I liked the various emotions you included in the story. Will's desperation to save Warren. His unbridled happiness/joy that Warren's unharmed. Warren's horror of the journalists being privy to it. Will's anxiety and apprehension of facing Warren after the fact-at home. Warren's anger/fury, stomping around the house-turning a variety of Will's belongings to ashes. Will's hopeful plea for forgiveness. Warren's frustration-clanging things around the kitchen. Control, submission, desire, lust, SEXY HOTNESS a couple of other emotions/feelings and ending it with wonderful humor. You took the words and the emotions and weaved them into a very entertaining story. I'm glad i had the opportunity to read it-thanks for sharing it with us.