ext_20233 ([identity profile] beatperfume.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] untappedbeauty 2007-09-28 03:26 am (UTC)

OH. MY GOD.

This might be my new favorite GSF ever. Feel free to let Ryan Ross take over your stories all the time, because damn. All that angst just makes the happy ending even better.

So pretty much, I love everything about this story, but. That scene between Jon and Ryan, when Ryan punches him. So amazing. And painful, but also awesome, because there's so much emotion there. And when Ryan writes gives Jon the security code and Jon looks away took my breath away. I then continued to not breathe because when Ryan started jerking off for Brendon and Spencer and Jon I was holding my breath just so full of love for Ryan and his determination to fix things and his courage and his desire and all of his Ryan-ness. And then when Jon opened the curtain. So much yes.

I love your Brendon, so adorable and hot all at the same time. I love the little detail of Ryan planning it so that his attempt to fix things was the night before a hotel night. I have nothing to say about the sex because my brain just dissolves into white noise from hotness when I think about it. And then Spencer and Ryan reconnecting and everybody being so much themselves when they have sex. And watching The OC.

Basically, YES YES YES to the whole thing. I loved it so much. Thank you!

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