I read this right when you first posted it, and then I read it twice more, and I'm still having a hard time leaving any sort of coherent feedback. There is so much going on in this story- the amazing Ryan characterization, all the Ryan/Jon interaction, Spencer/Brendon, the eventual GSF, the humor, the tension, the unconditional love. I would have been amazed that you were able to keep all of it going so impeccably if it was only a couple thousand words. A fic of this length that's this incredible is unreal.
This story was an absolute pleasure to read and then reread, and I'm looking forward to reading it again in the future. On each reread I discovered something new that totally bowled me over. I hope you don't mind that it took me this long to review!
And on a shallow note, this:
"Don't fucking judge me," Brendon says, and the anger sounds wrong when he's still breathless.
"God," Spencer says, and that's a real growl this time. "Don't judge me either, then."
Is possibly the hottest thing written in this fandom, or any fandom. Ever.
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Date: 2007-10-10 06:50 am (UTC)This story was an absolute pleasure to read and then reread, and I'm looking forward to reading it again in the future. On each reread I discovered something new that totally bowled me over. I hope you don't mind that it took me this long to review!
And on a shallow note, this:
"Don't fucking judge me," Brendon says, and the anger sounds wrong when he's still breathless.
"God," Spencer says, and that's a real growl this time. "Don't judge me either, then."
Is possibly the hottest thing written in this fandom, or any fandom. Ever.