That was ridiculously hot. I am trying to think of ways to convey the depth of the hotness, but I keep coming up short. There are not enough explicit rimming fics in the world, and there should be. Watching Ryan come apart is a thing of beauty, but still maintaining that dry thing he has, all monosyllabic and wry.

I love how enthralled Brendon is with Ryan. That he comes apart watching Ryan as much as Ryan does. That thread of the things Brendon will do because Ryan likes them, the lengths he'd go to see him get to that place, that's an interesting thing to think about.

Ryan's gaze flickers down to Brendon's cock, and he licks his lips, says, "Touch yourself."

Brendon moves to straddle Ryan's hips, pushing his own hips forward and putting himself on easy display. Then he obeys.

Ok, I love how casually demanding Ryan can be in that state of thorough debauchery. And there's something about the words in that last line. The 'display' and 'obeys,' just how displayed that one line makes Brendon after all that displaying of Ryan Ross. But then all the previous display is through Brendon looking at Ryan, through him thinking in those terms so then when he turns those terms on himself at the end, I don't know, it's just interesting. The flip of it.