Wow, thank you! Talk about making a girl's day! I wouldn't have expected such in-depth feedback over straight-up porn, but I'm thrilled that you liked it and that their characters came through so well in it.
Personally, Brendon in this ficlet is a good bit of how I could see him being in a relationship with Ryan -- he wants to please Ryan, he loves pleasing him and making him come apart, and he gets off on that. In the end, when the tables turn, it's mostly because I think Brendon likes showing Ryan how sexy he thinks Ryan is, how much Ryan turns him on. It's always for Ryan, and he would try anything Ryan wanted. God, I'm ridiculous, but I think it'd be really fucking sweet, no matter how filthy the sex was.
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Wow, thank you! Talk about making a girl's day! I wouldn't have expected such in-depth feedback over straight-up porn, but I'm thrilled that you liked it and that their characters came through so well in it.
Personally, Brendon in this ficlet is a good bit of how I could see him being in a relationship with Ryan -- he wants to please Ryan, he loves pleasing him and making him come apart, and he gets off on that. In the end, when the tables turn, it's mostly because I think Brendon likes showing Ryan how sexy he thinks Ryan is, how much Ryan turns him on. It's always for Ryan, and he would try anything Ryan wanted. God, I'm ridiculous, but I think it'd be really fucking sweet, no matter how filthy the sex was.