From one size queen to another: Jon, I totally get it. Guh.
Obviously I am in love with stories about Ryan's cock, but a lot of them feel kind of contrived, or repetitive. Or worse yet, it just feels like the author drooling over Ryan's dick and grafting that onto someone else. But this.... mmmmm. The emphasis was not so much "OMG it's big" but "OMG I am imagining it in my mouth/ass/etc" - which is the hot part anyway. And your descriptions: so filthy and amazing. Especially all the fingering... whoa. Just. Whoa.
I loved your pacing too - so many fics are all "Jon notices dick. Jon jacks off. Jon realizes he's gay. Jon makes his move" and it all happens within, like, three days. But there were all these sort of almost-maybe moments where the two of them were toeing a line, maybe joking, maybe serious. And thank you for not writing Ryan as blushing and/or flustered whenever his size was mentioned - because a dude who gets the ladies and who has lived his whole life with that thing would not be surprised anymore, I imagine he'd be pretty aware of it. Instead, it was those moments where he admitted the little things about it - certain girls being able to take it, others not - that were SO hot and felt much more realistic.
I am pretty much an equal fan of all Panic pairings, but I feel like this is one that could be much more feasible than the others, especially how you wrote it here. Jon is such a dude's dude, but at the same time he has that lisp and unapologetic cuddly sort of thing going on - it's a really sexy combo for gay shenanigans. I love Spencer & Ryan's androgyny and Brendon's diva-in-tiny-pants thing, but I'll admit that what Jon's got going on is both more intriguing and more realistic: bi-curious with a beard. Mmmm. So you know that it's still channel surfing and smoking joints after sex, not doe-eyes and confessions of never-ending love.
I also have to say: I was telling j_plash that I am new to bandom, and noticed that people don't write sex as much here - I mean the actual act of it, the fucking, the feelings... usually it's all about the foreplay, then it's just get inside and come. But you wrote exactly what I feel like I've been missing, and you wrote it SO well. The detail, the sounds, the sensations of the sex were mind-blowing and made me think about what I love so much about it. And by "sex" I am including the thigh-fuck because that was incredibly hot, made even more so because Ryan seemed to have this wry wealth of knowledge about kinky and creative sex...
OK I'm stopping before I ramble any more. Mostly it's embarrassing that I have this much to say about steamy porn. :) Thanks for such a refreshing and hot read!
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Obviously I am in love with stories about Ryan's cock, but a lot of them feel kind of contrived, or repetitive. Or worse yet, it just feels like the author drooling over Ryan's dick and grafting that onto someone else. But this.... mmmmm. The emphasis was not so much "OMG it's big" but "OMG I am imagining it in my mouth/ass/etc" - which is the hot part anyway. And your descriptions: so filthy and amazing. Especially all the fingering... whoa. Just. Whoa.
I loved your pacing too - so many fics are all "Jon notices dick. Jon jacks off. Jon realizes he's gay. Jon makes his move" and it all happens within, like, three days. But there were all these sort of almost-maybe moments where the two of them were toeing a line, maybe joking, maybe serious. And thank you for not writing Ryan as blushing and/or flustered whenever his size was mentioned - because a dude who gets the ladies and who has lived his whole life with that thing would not be surprised anymore, I imagine he'd be pretty aware of it. Instead, it was those moments where he admitted the little things about it - certain girls being able to take it, others not - that were SO hot and felt much more realistic.
I am pretty much an equal fan of all Panic pairings, but I feel like this is one that could be much more feasible than the others, especially how you wrote it here. Jon is such a dude's dude, but at the same time he has that lisp and unapologetic cuddly sort of thing going on - it's a really sexy combo for gay shenanigans. I love Spencer & Ryan's androgyny and Brendon's diva-in-tiny-pants thing, but I'll admit that what Jon's got going on is both more intriguing and more realistic: bi-curious with a beard. Mmmm. So you know that it's still channel surfing and smoking joints after sex, not doe-eyes and confessions of never-ending love.
I also have to say: I was telling
OK I'm stopping before I ramble any more. Mostly it's embarrassing that I have this much to say about steamy porn. :) Thanks for such a refreshing and hot read!